Redaction (past simple)

Everybody knows that computer has changed not only the way of communicating but also the way of working. Yet it has positive and negative sides at the same time.

To start with, computer makes daily routine easier for those who use it. Another advantage of this is internet, that gives access to a wide range of information. What is more, it has improved lives of those who live in rural areas or isolated communities all around the world.

In contrast, spending too much time on the net can be harmful since it could cause anti-social tendencies and medical problems, particularly kids who could spend their time in outdoor recreation.

In short, computer has clearly improved our days, but we must be careful wide how we use it.

In my opinion, computers are necessary for our lives and obtain information and do homework from home